i can fly,
i have wings.
i can touch,
melting dreams.
call me now,
from afar,
thru the wind,
to the light.
Wanna Be An Angel
© Copyright: Desperate, 2002
Свидетельство о публикации №102031400041
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hi there :)
I haven`t seen you for... many mnay days :)
I`d change places of the forst two lines
I have wings - THEREFORE I can fly.. (just a suggestion)
mtlting dreams - растопая или растопив (вот же.. не знаю как по-русски) мечты?. how`s it?
from so far - work on it, doesn`t sound nice..
ok.. I found - afar, far away.. far efield :)
yeah... I really liked "thru the wind, to the light", but.. far-light... ;)) you know
nice to meet with you again :))
take care!
Клюква 03.04.2002 10:42 • Заявить о нарушении
I haven`t seen you for... many mnay days :)
I`d change places of the forst two lines
I have wings - THEREFORE I can fly.. (just a suggestion)
mtlting dreams - растопая или растопив (вот же.. не знаю как по-русски) мечты?. how`s it?
from so far - work on it, doesn`t sound nice..
ok.. I found - afar, far away.. far efield :)
yeah... I really liked "thru the wind, to the light", but.. far-light... ;)) you know
nice to meet with you again :))
take care!
Клюква 03.04.2002 10:42 • Заявить о нарушении