i"m bored,
i"m in despair.
for years i was
just unaware.
Of all the pain,
that had be done.
And all the pain,
Thats yet to come.
A thought swirls
Hastly in my head.
Is this living,
Or Am I Dead?
The lines above,
Are just a quote.
But yet they show,
My life"s revoked.
My thoughts have changed,
The last few years.
I am a man,
With my own fears.
I fear I live,
I breath, I am.
Please cut the crap,
Show me the end.
Realize?
© Copyright: Desperate, 2001
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this is really good...
for me it`s qiestionable in its essense.. I mean, the subject.. to personal.. but as a whole.. I like it (subjective)
good luck!
Клюква 21.10.2001 10:46 • Заявить о нарушении
for me it`s qiestionable in its essense.. I mean, the subject.. to personal.. but as a whole.. I like it (subjective)
good luck!
Клюква 21.10.2001 10:46 • Заявить о нарушении
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