Рецензия на «The Dance Under the July Rainbow» (Владимир Хорошевский)

Your wonderful sensual verse
As an amazing fairytale...
I dance for you one more else,
That you will glad, will say Ok!..

I`s too hard to catch Love`s Rainbow,
Please, take me on the cloud, -
Take off my fine wings-elbows...
I want not be with you so good!:)))))

Вита-Самарянка   25.07.2012 04:34     Заявить о нарушении
Hi, Vicky! I'm really suprised that this your impromptu was
written from the "Vita-Samaryanka" nick. Are your somewhere
outside Riga, on vacations, or this is a secret?:)))
Thanks a lot for your verse-comment...
I just didn't comprehend the sense of the last line...
"I want NOT be with you so good!" - What does it mean,
playin' with words?
Kiss you. Y.B.

Владимир Хорошевский   25.07.2012 20:38   Заявить о нарушении
Good evening, Bob!:))I`m very glad because i like to make surprise to you,
my dear,precious friend!:))I`m very glad also that can written from my old
nike, from my first page on this site..:)This your verse is really fine!:)
I hope you are good and happy now..I`s playin` with words of course, but
i want NOT be a "angel" or "saint" and fanatical religious lady as some
your girl-friend there...:)My little holiday was going well,with kisses,y.
Vicky

Вита-Самарянка   25.07.2012 23:53   Заявить о нарушении

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