Deenichka - полученные рецензии
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Рецензия на «Kosovo» (Deenichka)
Праильно! Руки прочь от Косово! :))
Малаша Мукачевская 21.04.2004 22:16 • Заявить о нарушении
Праильно! Руки прочь от Косово! :))
Малаша Мукачевская 21.04.2004 22:16 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «The Sound of Dying» (Deenichka)
The sound of Dying...
It is so short,
That in your life
It takes only a moment...
Yet the sound of Dying,
Is so long,
That your life,
Blinking before your eyes,
Seems to have taken no more
Than a short fraction of Time...
A moment...
Truly,
Natalie
Росиночка 10.11.2003 21:23 • Заявить о нарушении
The sound of Dying...
It is so short,
That in your life
It takes only a moment...
Yet the sound of Dying,
Is so long,
That your life,
Blinking before your eyes,
Seems to have taken no more
Than a short fraction of Time...
A moment...
Truly,
Natalie
Росиночка 10.11.2003 21:23 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Моё Утешение» (Deenichka)
i'm back Deenie ;)
back to the list of your readers
to my mind, when we change ourselves, and not only speak of changes, we can call it success..
i hope you are fine
looking forward to seeing your new poems here
see you,
Deviant 14.03.2002 01:55 • Заявить о нарушении
i'm back Deenie ;)
back to the list of your readers
to my mind, when we change ourselves, and not only speak of changes, we can call it success..
i hope you are fine
looking forward to seeing your new poems here
see you,
Deviant 14.03.2002 01:55 • Заявить о нарушении
Hello Deviant,
I am foolish enough not to give up trying to write poetry. It is a fault of mine without cure.
Thanks for your encouragement:)
deenichka
Deenichka 25.03.2002 22:48 Заявить о нарушении
I am foolish enough not to give up trying to write poetry. It is a fault of mine without cure.
Thanks for your encouragement:)
deenichka
Deenichka 25.03.2002 22:48 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «nobody» (Deenichka)
w0w...
not sure about the lack of rhytm or a tempo, but
the vese itself is wonderful. Be a nobody, be unseen.
Thats the ultimiate goal of my existence. Probably.
Desperate 21.10.2001 17:46 • Заявить о нарушении
w0w...
not sure about the lack of rhytm or a tempo, but
the vese itself is wonderful. Be a nobody, be unseen.
Thats the ultimiate goal of my existence. Probably.
Desperate 21.10.2001 17:46 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «nobody» (Deenichka)
When lamps blind so,
That the lips burn down,
Probably, it is better to sit out in mine
On the day
And to see stars
Ник Кита 20.10.2001 12:08 • Заявить о нарушении
When lamps blind so,
That the lips burn down,
Probably, it is better to sit out in mine
On the day
And to see stars
Ник Кита 20.10.2001 12:08 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «From my journal on September 11th» (Deenichka)
Boeing is a carelessness, which diging.
I try to understand, that happened.
America - now not the child.
With participation
Ник Кита 20.10.2001 11:58 • Заявить о нарушении
Boeing is a carelessness, which diging.
I try to understand, that happened.
America - now not the child.
With participation
Ник Кита 20.10.2001 11:58 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «The Sound of Dying» (Deenichka)
The train goes
The sky is silent
Also sees off by a sight
Yours faithfully
Ник Кита 20.10.2001 11:47 • Заявить о нарушении
The train goes
The sky is silent
Also sees off by a sight
Yours faithfully
Ник Кита 20.10.2001 11:47 • Заявить о нарушении
Sorry i'm late getting back to you. I speak only English and have difficulty at this site.
Thank you for your very nice addition:)
Deenichka 17.11.2001 05:44 Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for your very nice addition:)
Deenichka 17.11.2001 05:44 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «From my journal on September 11th» (Deenichka)
hello again Deenie !
I liked best the last 4 lines - great imagery and the strong essense of sadness for all those who died and suffered that horrible day..
I personally think, though, that no cries or sadness could resurrect anyone or make the further life of your country better... But if all of you unite the power of your spirits, I"m sure you will overcome everything !
Goodluck,
Deviant 15.10.2001 • Заявить о нарушении
hello again Deenie !
I liked best the last 4 lines - great imagery and the strong essense of sadness for all those who died and suffered that horrible day..
I personally think, though, that no cries or sadness could resurrect anyone or make the further life of your country better... But if all of you unite the power of your spirits, I"m sure you will overcome everything !
Goodluck,
Deviant 15.10.2001 • Заявить о нарушении
Sorry I'm late getting back to you. It's hard for me to get around at this site since I only speak English:(
As always, thanks for your support. But it seems that my next job will probably be military.
Deenichka 17.11.2001 05:47 Заявить о нарушении
As always, thanks for your support. But it seems that my next job will probably be military.
Deenichka 17.11.2001 05:47 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «nobody» (Deenichka)
hi dear Deenie..
you may be surprised, but I would like to be nobody..
when no one knows you, it"s a lot easier to do what you want to..
but as for you, just remember what I told you - while there are people who appreciate you, and who are dear to you - you will be a Personality. Every man and every woman is a star - remember that :)
cheer up, life is wonderful :)
hugs,
Deviant 30.09.2001 17:43 • Заявить о нарушении
hi dear Deenie..
you may be surprised, but I would like to be nobody..
when no one knows you, it"s a lot easier to do what you want to..
but as for you, just remember what I told you - while there are people who appreciate you, and who are dear to you - you will be a Personality. Every man and every woman is a star - remember that :)
cheer up, life is wonderful :)
hugs,
Deviant 30.09.2001 17:43 • Заявить о нарушении