Рецензия на «А. Пушкин - Я вас любил... English translation» (Беляева Дина)

Добрый день, утро или вечер, Дина!
Я рад, что вновь услышал Вас. Было дело, когда-то я с Вами общался и получал огромное удовольствие и помощь в моих потугах поэта и переводчика.
Все ваши версии данного перевода прекрасны.
Я хотел бы только добавить свои пару строчек к предисловию стихотворения А.С. Пушкина и "навязать" Вам мой собственный перевод.
Если сочтёте нужным отзовитесь. Буду весьма признателен. Заранее прошу извинить меня за мой корявый английский язык. Итак:

Alexander Pushkin
I loved you

Alexander Pushkin (1799-1837) is one of the greatest Russian poets of all times.
In the below poem the author is probably writes of his own feelings to his most beloved woman. It is well known that he was sort of love lass and many people knew that. The poem was written in 1829 when Pushkin was already a very popular author. Among his famous works one can find many a poem dedicated to various women. It is suggested that the poem 'I loved you' was written to Anna Olenina a very beautiful and famous singer of those times whom he wanted to marry and was rejected by her parents.
I loved you
* * *
I loved you: and my love may still remain,
Deep in my soul where it has not died yet;
But let it no longer cause you pain;
I do not wish to make you feel upset.

I loved you silently and with despair,
Through bouts of jealousy or silent stealth;
I loved you tenderly as one may dare,
God bless you to be loved by someone else.
1829

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