Рецензии на произведение «Если рушится мир»

Рецензия на «Если рушится мир» (Арихитс)

http://www.stihi.ru/2014/06/29/8011
If the world collapsed...

If all this... the conditions textures -
death... and birth... dependent-mutually...
The best symbol of the spliced cultures -
Hinduism... black-and-white... is truly...

The destruction... creation of worlds...
at GM wizard... from God in heavens..
Chess prodigy - in nirvana... in fondes...
in the artful battles... of the smart words...

мир не должен быть разрушен!!!
с улыбкой. обнимаю.

Миледи Ольга Переводы   29.06.2014 19:45     Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Если рушится мир» (Арихитс)

http://www.stihi.ru/2014/04/16/2707
If the world collapsed...

If all this... the conditions textures -
death... and birth... dependent-mutually...
The best symbol of the spliced cultures -
Hinduism... black-and-white... is truly...

The destruction... creation of worlds...
at GM wizard... from God in heavens..
Chess prodigy - in nirvana... in fondes...
in the artful battles... of the smart words...

You're Goddess of good luck, Lakshmi,
our virtuous marriage - so happy in bliss...
I'm your * Vishnu... playing in silence.

Together... we can cope... with our senses...
but, it can't be long... any way through life...
our dissociation... my beauty... my mistress...

с нежностью.

Принцесса Офелия   16.04.2014 09:49     Заявить о нарушении