Рецензии на произведение «Шаг, с которого начинается ВСЁ»

Рецензия на «Шаг, с которого начинается ВСЁ» (Марина Суханова -Тигра)

Марина, вот и перевод этого мудрого произведения.
Благодарю за возможность продвигать Дхарму.
Хель.

The step from which EVERYTHING starts

I follow the path covered with withered grass.
My thoughts are about events of the past day.
I suddenly step into a dirty puddle
And the stream of my thoughts stops with my steps.

How much rubbish do I carry with me? Where? Why?
Having asked this questions to myself, I wrap my mind into a silk cloth,
Weaved from threads of the web covering my mind,
I tie my attachments with a ribbon into an elaborated knot,
Which transforms into a flower, and offer it to the Tsar of Nags.
Everything starts from one step.

Now my mind is clean and I see every stone
Lying on the path.
The beetle crossing my way

And put it a bit further than it expected to step.
... everything starts with one step.

This time the beetle got amazingly lucky
He went away on his business.
This is how the Tsar of Nags manifested itself - not letting me take the step,
Which could have become fatal for one's small life.
Again, I have something to thank him for - for this mercy -
And forget the story, paying attention to the new moment of time
Which starts with the new step.
My actions become the result of a momentarily understanding
Bringing satisfaction from that unexpected change,
Which here and now has become the success.
Now this event has changed the following moment
Which had been determined by the cause-effect law.
For both of us that small act became a greater event
Which has changed the direction of corridors in the energetic structure of the world
Fate turned from its path, covered with dirty puddles,
To the Clear way of good deeds.
Indeed, everything starts from one step of consciousness.

I approach my block of apartments, put the key in the electronic lock
And, hearing the characteristic sound, I open the door and enter.
Something makes me look back.
There is a woman with a baby carriage,
I hold the door and let her enter first. She smiles.
How nice her smile is, this quiet joy of life
Brings peace to my mind.
These small coincidences -
Barely noticeable sparks of satisfaction -
To which I pay little attention, having accumulated,
Become the lamp of light in the darkness of my existence.
But nothing extraordinary had happened
Apart from a simple coincidences ,
Making the moment of one step unexpectedly perfect,
From which EVERYTHING starts.

Хельга фон Краузиньш   26.11.2013 05:35   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Шаг, с которого начинается ВСЁ» (Марина Суханова -Тигра)

Мариночка! Родная моя! Трогательные строки написала! !! В них сама жизнь! В них сама любовь!! .С осенним теплом и любовью,, Светлана.

Светлана Полыгалова 2   16.11.2013 20:29   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Шаг, с которого начинается ВСЁ» (Марина Суханова -Тигра)

Маришка, как хорошо!!!!!!!!!!! Настроение твое передается как молчание реки ))), спасибо!!!
с любовью!!!!!!!!

Сар Сарнай   14.11.2013 04:11   •   Заявить о нарушении