Рецензии на произведение «What s our life?»

Рецензия на «What s our life?» (Елена Малиевская Обухова)

Let me express my admiration.
It is the rare possibility to find
English poems in our Club. moreover -
with nontrivial sense.
Some kind of answer you may see jn my
page - as thr first number. Because it
had been "exhumated" just now for your
reading. If it would be of any interest
you may find there some more verses
in English in my performance. Not too
big number, sure.

V.K.

Владимир Кошкин   21.10.2009 17:15     Заявить о нарушении
I'm so pleased and flattered! :)) The degree of my thankfulness is so great that it is very hard to express it! :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Gratitude is not only the greatest of virtues, but the parent of all others.
Cicero (106 BC - 43 BC), 'Pro Plancio,' 54 B.C.

Елена Малиевская Обухова   21.10.2009 17:25   Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «What s our life?» (Елена Малиевская Обухова)

I am not an english grammar expert but IMHO

Not angels, supermen or elves

sounds a bit better

Best regards

Марк Дубинский   24.06.2007 02:08     Заявить о нарушении
Thanks a lot, Mark! First I wrote what you advise but later thought that a superman is unique and turned the plural form into singular.
Bye the way "English" has to be written with capital letter. Best regards! Good luck to you. Come again. I am looking forward to your visiting me.

Елена Малиевская Обухова   24.06.2007 17:16   Заявить о нарушении
I've read the verse again and did what you said. With gratitude

Елена Малиевская Обухова   24.06.2007 19:46   Заявить о нарушении