Рецензии на произведение «Sonnet. V I I»
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Рецензия на «Sonnet. V I I» (Димитрий Волжанин)
не буду всё переводить. Просто поставлю плюс
Елена Авдеева 09.11.2007 09:15 • Заявить о нарушении
не буду всё переводить. Просто поставлю плюс
Елена Авдеева 09.11.2007 09:15 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Sonnet. V I I» (Димитрий Волжанин)
Your rhyming scheme: abab cdcd efe ggh -- This is not a sonnet. It should be: abab cdcd efg efg OR abab cdcd efe efe. Generally the trailing lines should rhyme in "English" sounding sonnets. For example: abab cdcd efef gg.
А Сенсен 13.03.2007 10:21 • Заявить о нарушении
Your rhyming scheme: abab cdcd efe ggh -- This is not a sonnet. It should be: abab cdcd efg efg OR abab cdcd efe efe. Generally the trailing lines should rhyme in "English" sounding sonnets. For example: abab cdcd efef gg.
А Сенсен 13.03.2007 10:21 • Заявить о нарушении
Dear collegue
Thank you for your attantion and advise, I see you ruther experienced in it I'll be glad to get you review in future.
But...
I think that above is a sonnet, since the sonnet as a every poetic form, has a lot of forms sometimes veruy similar to each other for exmaple Italian and French sonnet... Also if you doubt please read classical poet for example Petrtarca's or shakesper's original texts - they also not always follow the rules for 100% even though they wrote, using such a solid form as sonnet.
Warm and thanks
Dimitry
Димитрий Волжанин 15.03.2007 10:04 Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for your attantion and advise, I see you ruther experienced in it I'll be glad to get you review in future.
But...
I think that above is a sonnet, since the sonnet as a every poetic form, has a lot of forms sometimes veruy similar to each other for exmaple Italian and French sonnet... Also if you doubt please read classical poet for example Petrtarca's or shakesper's original texts - they also not always follow the rules for 100% even though they wrote, using such a solid form as sonnet.
Warm and thanks
Dimitry
Димитрий Волжанин 15.03.2007 10:04 Заявить о нарушении
I agree with Dmitry. Italian sognette can have more schemes of rhyming than you mention. And although the sognette may be called 'Italian', it can be in any language.
Regards,
Илья Бестужев 15.03.2007 18:40 Заявить о нарушении
Regards,
Илья Бестужев 15.03.2007 18:40 Заявить о нарушении