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Рецензия на «Oneiromancy» (Clittary Hilton)

The winter day is breaking...
Clit's hands should be sunlit.
Your age spots in the making
shall vanish... Try it, Clit!

Зус Вайман   08.01.2019 02:03     Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Oneiromancy» (Clittary Hilton)

Wouldn’t be nice if we all can just simply interpret our life as it’s appear in our dreams?… Mostly by means of beautiful images?…

It’s wonderful, what can I say… I meant the poem:).

Sincerely,

Alika

Alika Lianders   13.05.2003 22:35     Заявить о нарушении
who knows, perhaps that's what it is, a dream?

row row row your boat
gently down the stream
merrily merrily merrily merrily
life is but a dream

Clittary Hilton   14.05.2003 00:24   Заявить о нарушении
I think, yes, that is what IT is…

Or, at least, that is what I want to be…:):):)

Sincerely,

Alika

Alika Lianders   14.05.2003 22:38   Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Oneiromancy» (Clittary Hilton)

I really liked your poem, Clittary! Thanks, sooner or later we all wake up...

Sincerely yours,
Henry

Henry Serhienko   29.03.2003 06:57     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you, Henry

Clittary Hilton   29.03.2003 20:13   Заявить о нарушении
Young Henry was as brave a youth
As ever graced a martial story
And Jane was fair as lovely truth
She sighed for love and he for glory

Clittary Hilton   02.04.2003 20:53   Заявить о нарушении
Wow! I just saw your answer, Clittary! Who wrote that? If you name one of the great poets, I'll be ashame of myself...

Thanks,
Henry

Henry Serhienko   04.04.2003 07:32   Заявить о нарушении
I do not remember the name of the author, some medieval English poet for sure... I learned it by hear when I was a child... it has three stanza, the 2nd I do not recall but the third is beautiful too:

Young Henry met the foe with pride
Jane followed, fough, ah, hapless story!
In man's attire, by Henry's side
She died for love and he for glory

The poem, if I am not mistaken is called "Love and Glory", I could not find it on the google by excerpts... if you find, let me know

Clittary Hilton   05.04.2003 00:32   Заявить о нарушении
I found the middle stanza in the old "Royal Songster":

With her his faith he meant to plight,
And told her many a gallant story,
Till war their honest joys to blight,
Call'd him away from love to glory.

Clittary Hilton   13.01.2007 20:49   Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Oneiromancy» (Clittary Hilton)

Брутально!
)))

Лохайло Мимоносов   29.03.2003 01:56     Заявить о нарушении
и ты, Брут...

Clittary Hilton   29.03.2003 20:12   Заявить о нарушении