Где найти мне слова... Анетта Руж

http://www.stihi.ru/2009/12/01/1157

...      Где найти мне слова, чтоб созвучьями стали...
      доброты и любви той... что в сердце храню?
   и, понятные всем, те слова бы звучали...
Задевая души роковую струну!
 
...      Где найти мне аккорд... чтоб звучать мелодично...
      голубою волной разбиваясь о борт...
   корабля... что плывет сквозь шторма безразличья...
в океане судьбы из далеких широт...

...      Где найти мне мелодий волшебных звучанье -
      гармоничное... с пением птиц на заре...
   с нежным шелестом трав... с глубиною молчанья...
понимающих душ... сострадающих мне...

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I try to find the words...

...     I try to find the words... would became like accords ...
      of kindness and of love... they'd be kept in my heart...
   They'll be close to men... those words would be heard...
if I'll touch strings of fate... in a soul of sounds...

...      I try to find the hords... like the melody heards...
      by blue waves... in my head... they have broken of...
   Ships are floating through...the indifference storm...
through the ocean swings... in the breadth of wind strong...

...      I try to find the melody... of sweet magical sound...
      in concord with sunrise ... with the singing of birds...
   with gentle rustle of grasss... with the depth of a silence...
which could feel my regret... all ones hearing souls...


PS: перенесено с другой странички
http://www.stihi.ru/2010/10/31/5625
Ольга Х

окончательно... :)
 


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If I'll find the words...

... If I'll find the words... would became like accords ... of kindness and of love... they'll be kept in my heart... They'll be close to men... those words would be heard... if I'll touch strings of fate... in a deepness of sounds...

... If I'll find the hords... like the melody heards... off the board of life...by blue wave they'll be dropped... Ships are floating through...the indifference storm... through the ocean rocks... in the breadth of wind strong...

... I'll find the melody... of sweet magical sounds... in concord of sunrise...with the singing of birds... with the rustle of grasss... with the depth of a silence... which could feel my regret... all ones hearing souls...

Ольга Х   03.09.2016 16:58     Заявить о нарушении
I try to find the words...

... I try to find the words... would became like accords ... of kindness and of love... they'd be kept in my heart... They'll be close to men... those words would be heard... if I'll touch strings of fate... in a soul of sounds...

... I try to find the hords... like the melody heards... by blue waves... in my head... they have broken of... Ships are floating through...the indifference storm... through the ocean swings... in the breadth of wind strong...

... I try to find the melody... of sweet magical sound... in concord with sunrise ... with the singing of birds... with gentle rustle of grasss... with the depth of a silence... which could feel my regret... all ones hearing souls...

Миледи Ольга Переводы   04.09.2016 18:20   Заявить о нарушении
Мне оба варианта ОЧЕНЬ нравятся!!!! СПАСИБО!!!!
с теплом и любовью,

Анетта Руж   06.09.2016 03:22   Заявить о нарушении