Рецензии на произведение «Сто один солдат»

Рецензия на «Сто один солдат» (Таня Калистратова)

Сильные стихи! Ещё читала, что они специально выбрали не славян, чтобы показать, что русские "не арийцы"

Нина Шуркина   03.09.2022 09:27   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сто один солдат» (Таня Калистратова)

Кое-где ритм и порядок отличны от оригинала. Немного потерян восточный колорит и детали. Не судите строго.

101 soldiers

That brutal war had darkened the first season,
They, so unbloodied, tested not a day,
Were sentenced all together with no reason,
Put in a list entitled ‘M.I.A.’*

*MIA (missed in action) – без вести пропавший

Now captured, but with their heads held high.
At home the parting bread’s still fresh and steaming. **
They hardly bit it, leaving with a sigh,
On-wall reminders of the past to their women.

Back home they all expect a dear mate,
A husband, sons, a brother, or a neighbor,
A hot strong tea again is on the grate,
You fuss to finish quickly kitchen labor.

They’ll finish later this homemade flatbread.
There’ll be long sounds of glorifying brasses.
And winds will bring this hailing news ahead
For joy to reign on waters, sands and grasses.

The count of them was just one hundred one,
They might be Uzbeks, the sons of Central Asia,
With their last strengths they stayed, were nearly gone,
But hope lived on, to it there was no measure.

They were deprived of drink and food for days,
A tricky plan the fascists had invented.
To sting their pride and make them lose their face,
To do it all quick, sharp, unprecedented.

To Europe it was firstly planned to show
Barbarians, just cattle, slaves for selling,
That for a loaf they’d rip each other, so…
But Nazi’s plan was surely doomed to failing.

Up the main street they draggled in a string
To the death-camp with loaded wires around.
The fascists failed to count just one thing,
It’s in the East the Sun to rise is bound.

The monsters started their inhuman shoot,
A loaf was thrown to make the Uzbeks battle,
But the unpeople scarcely understood,
A Man is no cow-house cattle.

One calmly picks the bread and with a spoon
Splits it in equal parts among the others,
And each of them enjoys it slowly soon,
As if the pains of hunger were no bother.

Defeated was those Nazi’s brutal plot,
And so misjudged was cunning ‘Untermenschen’,
The tormenters themselves were fairly taught,
But smaller ration was their new ‘invention’.

All those tortures were impossible to bear,
For the whole camp the Uzbeks were a riddle,
How they lived through – of a soon death aware -
Enjoying their life’s just every little.

Into kin brothers turned by their grave,
They were shot down in the morning garden.
They met last spring remaining calm and brave,
Not begging anyone to save them or to pardon.

The memories of them had to survive,
Achieves burnt at setbacks out of town.
It’s to their bodies only that death was to arrive,
They are in heaven and for us are never down.

Their families were waiting on in vain,
Into a stone turned the ‘reminding’ pastry.
No little bit relieved is burning pain,
As long as even crumbles can’t be wasted.

Дмитрий Бек-Лемешев   04.07.2019 14:46   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сто один солдат» (Таня Калистратова)

Очень больно.Как ты такое выносишь?

Алексей Белов 4   02.07.2019 10:18   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сто один солдат» (Таня Калистратова)

Люди - везде люди.
А зверьё - везде зверьё...(((

Александр Анатольевич Лозовой   28.06.2019 04:39   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сто один солдат» (Таня Калистратова)

Верно,Танечка!!!
Молодец!!!

Рафаил.

Рафаил Хабибуллин   20.06.2019 20:45   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сто один солдат» (Таня Калистратова)

Нет слов...Творческих удач!!!

Людмила Журавская   28.05.2019 07:08   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сто один солдат» (Таня Калистратова)

Проникновенно, патриотично и по человечески.
Спасибо. Помним.

Бурым Галина   21.05.2019 09:25   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сто один солдат» (Таня Калистратова)

Таня, молодец, хорошо написала, как-будто там душа летала. С теплом,

Татьяна Азорская   20.05.2019 06:10   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сто один солдат» (Таня Калистратова)

Рахмат,алтын аиль.
Жаз якши.

Сергей Замай   16.05.2019 16:29   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сто один солдат» (Таня Калистратова)

Вечная память героям Великой Отечественной!

Юлия Кулиш   14.05.2019 09:46   •   Заявить о нарушении